spring, 17th street

hello there
trees that line
my walk

green
looks good
on you.

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a contribution for readwritepoem

6 comments:

  1. short and sweet, I like that...

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  2. Nice spring poetry! I need that encouragement. It is cold and windy here in New Jersey!

    We were just in San Francisco last weekend and it was a bit chilly there too but at least the sun was out and it was green! Coming back here was depressing! ;-)

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  3. Very nice poem. I like it!

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  4. Greeting the trees, great idea. The brevity suits the "hello".

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  5. hi juliet,
    thank you. glad you liked it.

    hi mauigirl,
    ah, i also feel the same way every time i come back from a vacation. i'm sending blue skies and green trees your way! :)

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  6. hi january,
    thank you. :)

    hi deb,
    thank you. its been a rough week for me and all i can write is a short and somewhat upbeat poem.

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