was she stealing a glance of her date, stomach grumbling in disgust; stealing a glance of the yummy dessert, stomach grumbling in hunger; this is really open to more than one interpretation and i like it a lot! jan
hmmm... i reckon its both - the dessert and the date! :D
excellent!
Good poem, Odessa!
Food and love -- yummy combo!:)
was she stealing a glance of her date, stomach grumbling in disgust; stealing a glance of the yummy dessert, stomach grumbling in hunger; this is really open to more than one interpretation and i like it a lot! jan
ReplyDeletehmmm... i reckon its both - the dessert and the date! :D
ReplyDeleteexcellent!
ReplyDeleteGood poem, Odessa!
ReplyDeleteFood and love -- yummy combo!
ReplyDelete:)