a little note

to the man strumming his guitar on Dolores Street:
a glimpse of you, sitting on the front
steps of a tall Victorian house
while I walk past up, up the hill
thinking, I could turn around and ask you
to marry me, or I could just let you be -

head bent, eyes closed, long fingers
poised on strings, one with your music.

7 comments:

  1. ask
    and your
    heart will thank

    you

    wait
    and your
    mind will haunt

    you


    sweet poem, he inspired.

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  2. Did you leave him this note? Ahh, he would have sung a tune to tie him to you, as he has you, to him. ;)

    I've missed visiting here (nakaka-miss magsulat at magbasa). My luck to read your writings again. Cheers.

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  3. jade, welcome! and thanks for visiting. he certainly did inspire.

    mauigirl and cuileann, thank you!

    s.l., its so good to hear from you! i didn't leave him this note, i'm not that brave. maybe when i walk by his house/apartment next time...we'll see. haha.

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  4. Very nice. Love the last two lines.

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